- Presentations are on Monday! Be ready.
- Also, please put 12 quotes from your story on your blog. For each one, explain why you chose it (why is it important?).
“father gathers us around him in a circle and encourage us to visualize losing so that when we actually do it want hurt so much”this line is important because it show that the character have some difficulty in his life the character is waiting for something so big in his life or the life of other that is going to change his life dramatically that it depend upon the decision of someone.
“if you set out to do what i think you’re going to do you’ll need to be good at sneaking”this show that if he go out of the zone is like getting into a river of piranha that are waiting for you to go in to devour you. you need to be berry alert of people around him.
“i mean really me and mine i mean Bonnie an little kyle and me period. not you.”this line is important because it show that people are going into a depression lack of everything and that they don’t care about nobody they are been egoist in order to survive in the real world.
“someone attempting to cross the Mississippi wearing a flawed bracelet wouldn’t exactly be greeted with open arms”this line is important because it show that the flawed people don’t have any right they are treat like animals with a bracelet that could distinguish from other and that if he get out of the zone he will face a penalty for life.
“i consider you a suicide. goodbye dear dead boy. our lord has reserved a spacial place in limbo for those who put an end to themselves”.this line shows that if he goes out of the flawed zone he will put a end to his selves and that if he get out is like a seaside that there no right for flawed and normal people will take advantage of him and even kill him without no revenge.
“daddy, dont leave me”the main character Cole is continue having the nightmare went her parent abandon him because of the financial problems that will contribute a lot in order to find her sister because oemtime went people have face so many challege in life is hard to be strong.
“jesus christ! “she scream” i just boinked a flawed dad!”as you can see even thought that he want to be nice to people flawed don’t have any right that at some point he need to be egoist and think about him selves not about nobody.
“i mean if we take this fraek to slavetown and sell him”this show that his journey to find her sister had make a big turn know he is going to be a slave and his goal know is not finding hi sister know is to find out a way to get out of there.
“he ask what i like best about myself and hits me until i admit i like nothing”as Cole know can see tht because of his incapasity he is no body and that he need to continue the men game until he find a way to get out of there withought looking back.
“he passes around snapshot of his rach and sit oohing while holding our lemonades between our knees.”Cole was sell two time until he decide to risk his life again in order to find his sister and scape from the men.