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1. Presentations are on Monday! Be ready.
2. Also, please put 12 quotes from your story on your blog. For each one, explain why you chose it (why is it important?).

“father gathers us around him in a circle and encourage us to visualize losing so that when we actually do it want hurt so much”this line is important because it show that the character have some difficulty in his life the character is waiting for something so big in his life or the life of other that is going to change his life dramatically that it depend upon the decision of someone.
“if you set out to do what i think you’re going to do you’ll need to be good at sneaking”this show that if he go out of the zone is like getting into a river of piranha that are waiting for you to go in to devour you. you need to be berry alert of people around him.
“i mean really me and mine i mean Bonnie an little kyle and me period. not you.”this line is important because it show that people are going into a depression lack of everything and that they don’t care about nobody they are been egoist in order to survive in the real world.
“someone attempting to cross the Mississippi wearing a flawed bracelet wouldn’t exactly be greeted with open arms”this line is important because it show that the flawed people don’t have any right they are treat like animals with a bracelet that could distinguish from other and that if he get out of the zone he will face a penalty for life.
“i consider you a suicide. goodbye dear dead boy. our lord has reserved a spacial place in limbo for those who put an end to themselves”.this line shows that if he goes out of the flawed zone he will put a end to his selves and that if he get out is like a seaside that there no right for flawed and normal people will take advantage of him and even kill him without no revenge.
“daddy, dont leave me”the main character Cole is continue having the nightmare went her parent abandon him because of the financial problems that will contribute a lot in order to find her sister because oemtime went people have face so many challege in life is hard to be strong.

“jesus christ! “she scream” i just boinked a flawed dad!”as you can see even thought that he want to be nice to people flawed don’t have any right that at some point he need to be egoist and think about him selves not about nobody.
“i mean if we take this fraek to slavetown and sell him”this show that his journey to find her sister had make a big turn know he is going to be a slave and his goal know is not finding hi sister know is to find out a way to get out of there.
“he ask what i like best about myself and hits me until i admit i like nothing”as Cole know can see tht because of his incapasity he is no body and that he need to continue the men game until he find a way to get out of there withought looking back.
“he passes around snapshot of his rach and sit oohing while holding our lemonades between our knees.”Cole was sell two time until he decide to risk his life again in order to find his sister and scape from the men.

1. What is the name of your story?
2. What outcome did your group pick for this week?
3. In one at least two paragraphs, explain how the outcome is related to your story.

Remember, this is a big part of how your individual outcome will be assessed and determined.

The story bounty is most related to the outcome 018.0910: Student analyzes George Saunders’ stories through the lens of moral dilemmas, altruism, and egoism. Throughout the hole story bounty the main character have face many moral dilemmas because of the certain kind of conflict that the character Cole had face between the rightness or wrongness. Some time doing something wrong can produce something good and doing something right can produce something bad. This whole idea is show throughout the beginning of the story bounty were the decision of a vote have change dramatic the life of flaweds(people with genetic problems) in the story. as the story continue Cole have a sister named Connie that have fall in love a normal human were Cole sing a contract thinking that was a good purpose, but the reality of that “good action” turn out bad because he had sing a slavery to sell her sister. The action of that individual can result into a bad outcome because it will effect the wider society of the flaweds. As the story goes Cole need to take a hard decision of risking his life going out of the prohibit zone to find her sister the decision that he took to go outside will affect the Flawed society because they will take there example that can cause a rebellion or many death. As Cole journey continue to find her sister he faced many challenges or many decision making that put a end to his journey were he have been recognize as a flawed a put in to slave sell know the public issue of rejecting flawed have put Cole into a hard situation.

MY NEW BABY….

Part 1:

Post your classwork from today on the blog.

Part 2:

Write a flash-fiction story about your picture from today. Include ideas from the work you did today. Show the connections that you made. Remember that flash-fiction stories have conflicts, rising action, climaxes and resolutions like any other story.

Waking in the forest as usually with my tribe and my mother in my side looking at the bird flying side to side I was just 4 years old I thought that I knew the Forrest as Tarzan. I fell that I was a big boy but everything that I did tire me a lot “mom I want something to eat’ she just tell me the usual to wait I don’t know how much I can wait because my bone I can fell it in my hands. they are 10 of us all most women living in a small house almost one on top of each other went I was sleeping I can fell the breath of desperation of my mother in my back and every time at night I saw my mother with a lot of plate in the table but with just a piece of rice and all most nothing inside seeing her looking at us. Making fell the same but just in a moment I was just a kid and I don’t understand a lot of stuff. but one day I was waking with my mother and she was crying the reason I don’t know but I was just looking at her went she say we are here ‘here were a lonely rode with nothing around with just bird she tell me to stay and wait for her until she came back I was just a kid and I don’t reality don’t understand what she was meaning or what she was trying to do but she was my mother and I wait, at night I was just looking around and my tires turn in to nothing I was tire, hungry and cold in the darkness of the forest I saw eyes of every color I was so afraid that I don’t even can talk or cry for help I just put my heads down and I here someone calling my named when I open it. it was just the bird announcing that it was already morning I was weak that I couldn’t even walk one step but I have to do it because there were a bird from the distance looking at me and in a moment my head turn cloudy and black. When I weak up I see different people around me with white cloth the just was telling me a wire language something but a figure it out that was you are going to be ok.

Part 3:

Write a reflection about your story that explains how your story shows sociological imagination. [Sociological imagination is the the connection between 1) personal troubles and public issues, 2) personal behavior and social interaction, 3) biography and history, 4) individuals and wider society, as well as other overlaps between the private and public life.] this flash fiction show personal trouble and public issues because what is happening the country such as lock of food and jods are making family make a terrible decision with there children and family.

Part 4:

Finish your time line and email it to Dolan at dolanbihs@gmail.com .

http://timerime.com/timeline/267978/

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